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Monday 12 July 2010

Adverbs

Alex knew that, by law, the traffic had to stop when she stepped onto the zebra crossing. She strode out confidently.

Jay knew that he’d been driving too fast. He slammed on the brakes desperately.

Alex knew nothing more. She lay, limply.

Alex’s Mum knew true sorrow. She cried inconsolably.

1 comment:

  1. Experimental... apparently, excessive use of adverbs is frowned upon in mini saga writing.

    That's one of the reasons I tried to make it a feature of this one.

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